Feedback:
"I really like the masthead as it links really well to the
genre of House music. I also really like the black, white and red theme, as it
creates a lot of colour triangles and ultimately draws you into the main image
of your male artist. Your main article has a clear link to the main image and
looks really good. The social media sites and website idea is really
interesting as it links to the social group of most teenagers to adults now a
days. Your male artist using direct address is another intriguing feature as
you feel as a reader that he is looking directly at you and addressing you.
Maybe you could change the colour of the word ‘favourite’ in your strapline so
that you can emphasise that it is a loved magazine."
"I like the how the picture looks like he is holding the quote as if he is presenting it. The background colour makes everything bold, and it creates synergy with the contents page and double page spread"
"I like the how the picture looks like he is holding the quote as if he is presenting it. The background colour makes everything bold, and it creates synergy with the contents page and double page spread"
After having feedback I changed my strapline to having the word 'favourite' and changed the colour to white which contrast against the black background which is bold and striking to the reader.
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