After having made a draft for my contents page I asked a group of people If they would be able to critic it and see what they liked and the dislikes about it so I can improve upon it.
Likes - The layout of the contents page was simplistic so that it was easy to read.
Liked the pictures used on the contents page.
Liked the colour of the masthead.
Dislikes - The colour of the cover lines, the don't stand out enough.
Needs more pages.
Show the importance of other articles with different colours on the cover lines or different
size fonts.
Different colour puff "free CD" to make it interesting.
To be able to improve my contents page I will -
- Change the colour of the cover lines to be able to look bold against the background colour and so the reader is able to read it.
- Most show more pages on the contents page as there would be more pages than 12 in a music magazine.
- Change the colour or font size of different cover lines to show the more or least important or the articles that would be interesting to the readers.
- Change the colour of the puff to make it look more interesting
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