I needed to change some parts to the front page of my magazine which I did change. The masthead is now at the top of the cover which will be the first thing the reader will look at. I also changed the name of from "Montsaye" to "School weekly" as I had already had the name Montsaye on the picture of the front page of the cover I still wanted that to be there to show the school however I decided to have another name to make it different to the school name.
Another problem with my first front cover age was the colour of the writing from a distance it was hard to read, I changed the colour from red; which is associated with danger and I didn't want to make the school look dangerous, so I changed the colour to yellow to make it easier to read. I ask other students to read the front page of the cover from a distance and all agreed that they were able to read the writing.
I like that you showed what changes you did and how you developed your work :)
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